NOWADAYS CHILDREN WATCH TOO MUCH TV.why is this happening ,and what can be done to prevent i
Nowadays we see many small kids watching tv and playing video games in their habitat,fetching by my side of of opinion,
there are many steps to motivate them to not stay in their habitat and not watch tv all the time.
Firstly children are very lazy nowadays staying and wasting their time by watching all the time tv and playing video games in television,this type of activity makes them lazy
and will not allow to activate their brain cells.This happens due to television corporates,they get their own benefits and profits through TRP and RATINGS by providing public set of
collective MOVIES and SERIES this makes children lazy.we find children not spending time with their family.Watching too much of television makes them unhealthy.
We find culture and generations are being changed in various types,parents should be more aware of children and try to motivate them and keep them committed in similar ways like
1.playing out door games,3.planing a family trip,2.every weekend children should go meet their grand parents and make children to stay and learn some more good habits.consequently
children grow their knowledge by observing outside city,makes them brisk and active in their day to day life.This helps children and they get adapt to these type of activity and
give them a clear vision about public and society.
To conclude,children watching too much of television makes them unhealthy and do not allow to active their brain cells by sitting in a same place frequently,parents should be aware and take
a step motivating children in similar ways this makes a family happy and healthy by committing themselves with other activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 8.36945812808 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36194029851 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09168755974 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533582089552 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 20.5024630542 327% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.172192832 50.4703680194 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 359.25 104.977214359 342% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.0 20.9669160288 320% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.12807881773 266% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.33497536946 356% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198239585947 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135089755701 0.0925447433944 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328203915744 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842081994282 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517271020371 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.3 12.6369458128 295% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.47 53.1260098522 7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 10.9458128079 269% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.94827586207 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.3980295567 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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