Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.
There has been a drastic change all over the world in recent years and one thing that has not changed much is crime. Many people opine the fact that it cannot be stopped but I am of the view that a halt can be given to it by taking necessary steps, such as strict laws and moral education. I will discuss the same with suitable examples.
Judicial laws play vital role in the establishment of the country. Government can stop unlawful acts by imposing harsher rules for the criminals so that they can feel the remorse of the deeds done by them and this will stop them to involve in such acts. For example, Dubai is know for its least crime rate which 16.81 percent only and this is the outcome of bold rules, which also includes public execution. These sentences may be a deterrent to other would-be offenders.
Furthermore, Moral teachings should be given to students in school and college. This can build a positive approach in them towards honest lifestyle. For instance, many muslim countries are teaching their children how to use weapons and making them rigid only for their religion which creates hate in their mind for others and eventually they become terrorists and connects with criminal groups. This is why there must be moral education for young generation.
There many minor crimes which people do in helplessness and to avoid such actions, it is important to rehabilitate criminals while they are in prison otherwise they may re-offend when they are released from prison.
To conclude, it is necessary to say that firm laws and punishments can infuse the habit of sincere and truthful living, which will automatically reduce the rate of crime and in due course it can come to least percentage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...lve in such acts. For example, Dubai is know for its least crime rate which 16.81 pe...
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Line 9, column 201, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the least'.
Suggestion: to the least
... of crime and in due course it can come to least percentage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82094594595 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50133045314 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.170426877 50.4703680194 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.769230769 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130585340297 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449669942668 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029252862857 0.071462118173 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074159059994 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211130100549 0.0609392437508 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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