Some people think that robots are very important to human’s future development. Others think that they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both opinions and give your personal view.
The number of scientists thinks that robots are playing an essential role in our routine life. While some individuals are skeptical and fear that these robots will have the negative impact on society, I believe that they would indeed be pivotal in the future development of mankind.
We are living in the fourth industrial revolution when machines support plenty of people’s lives, especially smart robots. First, automatic machine lines in manufacturing plants such as assembling the car or producing cement, steel are being innovated and upgraded, which would help to operate manufactories faster, improve quality and reliability and decrease the cost of hiring the workforce. Second, by using robots to replace human organs such as the legs and arms, the person who suffers from paralysis or loss the part of the bodies can act as a normal person. Furthermore, robotic products such as artificial intelligence robotics and unmanned aerial vehicles will greatly help science, medicine and military discover new planets and replace people in dangerous places. For example, scientists have used an unmanned aerial vehicle to replace people to help and monitor the levels of radioactive contamination in the nuclear power plant explosion caused by the double disaster of Japan's earthquake and tsunami in 2011, therefore the treatment of radioactive leakage and disaster recovery is very fast.
Robots are not all good, many problems occur when robots become the main part of people life. In the future, since the robots can take the place of many workforces in the factories, the people have to find new jobs or be retrained, robots can take the place of the humans in several situations, if the robots begin to replace the humans in every field, they will lead to unemployment. Moreover, The robots are not able to act any different from what they are programmed to do, so that If the control of robots goes in the wrong hands, The robots may cause the destruction.
In conclusion, in the near future, robots will join in our lives in various aspects and play a role of growing importance. Besides the robot must be managed to avoid an unexpected disaster.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13597733711 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72121666364 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592067988669 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.2073819852 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.083333333 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4166666667 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220091068412 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780215145234 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447367380113 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128964155591 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591679216898 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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