Some people think that several short holidays from school are better, while others think one long summer holidays for the year is better for children. Discuss both points and include your opinion.
The holiday season is a prefect time to refresh mind and burden less. One of the most pressing concerns is regarding the given topic should holidays provide to student; short or long? I shall explore the dimentions of this topic through examples and assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.
Taking one side of argument, there are people who believe that long summer vacation is good for children because in the vacations childen learn different type of skills: painting, music or other types of activities. Those student who did not pay the concentration on study in school time (in class) they have apportunity to learn these activities in long vacation (in camps) for making better students in another field and bright their future. American university conducted the survey in year 2008, they check the iq level of students, they learnt the more activities in long summer vications.
On the flip side, there are antegorists to this assertion who believe that short holidays from school are better. They bolster their view point by claming that in the short vacations(one weak) student pay proper focus on study, and also feel relax. In short vacation student have time for improving work performence and creativty. In short summer holidays students feel energetic to learn well and also expected to study with more confidence.
In concussion, schools should give the vacations to students, according to the level of students and how they develop our mind and improve the practical skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this student' or 'Those students'?
Suggestion: This student; Those students
...ng, music or other types of activities. Those student who did not pay the concentration on st...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k student pay proper focus on study, and also feel relax. In short vacation stude...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ected to study with more confidence. In concussion, schools should give the vac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, well, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53142326022 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582995951417 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0113402883 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242487137309 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910601255983 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547307334505 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128742203383 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672353678078 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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