Holidays are important part of life. These are the days when individual rest, learn new activites and spend them for there liesure time. Every individual have different opinion for summer breaks. Some individual think small summer breaks are good and some think long breaks are good for there children. In this essay we will discuss both the views.
Firstly, I would like to discuss about short breaks . In short breaks children can visit there relatives or friends, plan small trips, finish homeworks, spend the time in there liesure activities and playing games. Nowdays children having heavy burden of studies and competition short breaks are helpful to live life stress free.
Long summer breaks are much important than small breaks. In India, Indian women also enjoys the holidays at her parents home with there children. Children can learn new activities like music, drawing, sketching, dance, sports etc. In India summers are hot upto 52•c and it is difficult for schools and colleges to open. Summers made children sick due to high temprature, so it is important to make it holidays.
To put in a nutshell, in my opinion long breaks are important than small breaks. Small breaks suffer children education continuity and children are unable to learn new activities with complete dedication. In long breaks children have sufficient time to concentrate, rest, play and enjiy there childhood fully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22466960352 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40880131849 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568281938326 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1706492553 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.125 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1875 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232267816834 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798909111966 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541571570771 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146812270119 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842511741135 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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