Some people think that students in single-sex schools perform better academically. Others, however, believe that mixed schools provide children with better social skills for adult life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the contemporary world, opinions are divided as to whether students should attend the schools with co-education or the schools only for one gender. While I accept that there are some benefits of mixed schools, it is not to say that single-sex schools have no redeeming feature.
On the one hand , co-educational schools are the place for students to comprehensively develop social skills. Firstly, when participating in the dual gender classrooms, students jointly cooperate with not only their same-sex friends but also the opposite-sex ones, which boosts up the collaborative ability. For example,since their first day at school, some freshmen in mixed university in Vietnam have dramatically enhanced their teamwork skills, which yields many successes in their academic careers .Secondly, mixed school supply students with broad coverage of future issues relevant to both boys and girls ,with which they may encounter. It is estimated that pupils graduating from co-education will make their job prospects brighter because they were prepared for interpersonal skills in their high schools.
On the other hand, I think that the single-sex schools enable the pupils to achieve successfully academic attainment. The mono-gender schools prevent students from being attracted by opposite sex and foster them to concentrate on their academic goals. Were it not for the single-sex schools in China,the Chinese students would not gain such unprecedentedly high scores in the standardized tests like GRE and SAT. Moreover, pupils in those schools are provided with the comfortable and amiable environment, which augments both their confidence and the ability to cooperate with others. There is ample evidence suggesting that the female pupils will be less embarrassed when underperforming the tasks related to math and science, which are the strengths of their male counterparts. Therefore, the girls can easily seek help from their friends and will soon be kindled by these subjects.
In conclusion, though there are many advantages of the co-education, it seems to me that it would be better, for students to study in single-sex schools.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52583586626 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00208681629 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577507598784 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2849206177 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.846153846 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3076923077 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282298514077 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109426172353 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568070432031 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18542748875 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363481862383 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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