Some people think universities should provide knowledge and skills related to a future career; others think the true function of a university is to give access to knowledge for its own sake. What is your opinion of the main function of a university?
Nowadays, an increasing number of new university graduates have been unemployed and have no idea about what they need to do with their degree, in both developed and developing countries. Although there are many causes leading to this phenomenon, most people believe that this is because high-educating institutes like universities have focused on academic knowledge so considerably and forgotten the actual intellect or practical techniques, which are essential in workplaces. Base on my experience as a graduate of a big university, I mainly agree with the claim that job-related knowledge and skills should be prioritized in universities due to the following reasons.
Foremost, by orienting students to become qualified employees, universities could partly eliminate burdens of society. Specifically, the jobless rate would be decreased, firms could hire more well-trained staff, cutting off their time and expenses on retraining or governments will reduce the number of foreign experts whose wages have been occupied a great proportion of their annual budget. So, in the end, domestic human resource would be well-utilized, enabling a chance for the growth of the economy.
Next, the more students become competitive in the job market, the more benefits their university would get. As a win-win spirit, bachelors will appreciate and sponsor their old campus in many ways such as financing, upgrading equipment, infrastructure, implementing research or projects, etc. Moreover, its reputation would be gradually viral, attracting a huge amount of mature students and investment from enterprises. In other words, in the long-term, the more achievements of graduates, the more development and prosperity their university would get.
It is also true that each educational institution has their own vision, which might be the pursuit of the extraordinary intellect or the absolute loyalty of science and nobody have the right to prohibit them. Besides, some learners’ desire is not a regular 5 to 9 job, but academic accomplishments. However, due to the fact that most of us are stuck in the rat race, working skills must be on top priority.
In short, as a great demand for landing a job after graduation, universities would better guide and impart as much as possible applicable and useful “tools” and “weapons” to win in workplaces.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 177, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... absolute loyalty of science and nobody have the right to prohibit them. Besides, so...
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Line 13, column 270, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'job' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'jobs'.
Suggestion: jobs
...rs' desire is not a regular 5 to 9 job, but academic accomplishments. However,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, in short, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5564738292 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31484525209 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63085399449 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8339996236 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.071428571 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9285714286 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162216291792 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539531729628 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473375870046 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794586228057 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052107151488 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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