Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of wether the course is useful to an employer.
What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
definitely education plays an important role in future success of all of us, that is undeniable fact. today because of technological progresses (something that has a direct relevance to knowledge and education) to succeed in affairs,we need to possess a higher educational degree.
is it really necessary, having higher education degree to succeed in the future career?
When we ponder over this issue, we see that there is no definitive answer to this question. In my opinion, if we consider the “ future career “ as a puzzle, university education is one of the important pieces of this puzzle, that it’s essential for future success but it’s not adequate alone.
Undoubtedly, having a college education will pave the way for future success. because today, primary need for most of the new and sensitive jobs in different fields is, having higher knowledge of university . For example, in order to be a doctor or an engineer, and ... we definitely have to take courses in that profession at university and this means that, we must to have university degree about that career.
In addition, one of the prerequisites for advancement in some occupations (especially government jobs) is to have a postgraduate degree. For instance, in my country, in order to get promoted and become a manager, we definitely need a college degree. (In other say, a person with just secondary education and no more, could not be manager of some companies).
On the other hand, there are some occupations that for being successful in them there is no need to have a higher education degree and a person with secondary education or less can promote in them. For example, for being an expert carpenter or a plumber we need to have a practical experiences rather that higher eduction.
the outcome that draw in above discussion is, the need for higher education in succeed in any career is an undeniable fact despite we can say that having higher education alone cannot guarantee the future success in each person career. A person for being successful in future career as well as a higher university education degree, one must also have some other factors such as : having practical experiences, having professional behavior, having Perseverance,…
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15760869565 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91333393578 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45652173913 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2032848981 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.625 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136603414112 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058889647651 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410409285576 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773139235678 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518700019378 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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