some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workspace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.
What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
Some people believe that universities should accommodate graduates who have enough skills and wisdoms related to industries while, others think that the main function of universities is getting access to knowledge for its own sake. In my opinion, there should be a delicate balance between these two functions.
On the one hand, knowledge is a means of developing human activities. Without using updated technologies, which comes from knowledge, people are not able to cope with limited resources to feed the rising population. Hence, universities should encourage students to continue their educations in order to tackle these contemporary pitfalls and find the solutions for upcoming problems. For example, producing meat is now a big challenge because of its environmental effects. Fortunately, scientists can produce meat which is made up vegetarian fibers. This invention, can make meat as a most important resource of protein more accessible among indigents that improves the health condition of society and reduces the expected budget in this sector.
On the other hand, people should have right to expand their horizons regardless the industry’s demand. Some individuals, for example, come back to the academic atmosphere to learn new things based on their interests after retirement. Being in a process of learning could prevent getting depressed specially for retired people. So, universities should advocate for their right.
In conclusion, universities beside providing intelligent employers to push back the frontiers in industries, should provide the needed infrastructure for everyone who are keen to learn. In addition, universities can play an important role in refining the culture by virtue of increasing literacy rate and prevent to widespread fallacies in society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent to widespread fallacies in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67286245353 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02302034997 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665427509294 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2403579466 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37740632396 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107339291001 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118490837688 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225701686162 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13680963942 0.056905535591 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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