People have different views about whether animals should be kept in restricted places such as zoos. While some presume that they must live in the wild, I strongly agree with those who believe that they should be free and both views will be discussed in this essay.
There are several reasons why it is argued that keeping animals in zoos is advantageous. In recent years, many animals have been hunted by humans, and the habitat of some animals have been destroyed by climate change. because of this, keeping them in zoos can be beneficial. For example, doing so, we can prevent the extinction of pandas by scientific supervision in such specific places. Furthermore, people who have no experience of seeing these beautiful animals have a chance to watch them. Lastly, watching them in zoos can be pleasant for kids who were taught about them in their books and their imagination can be improved.
Nevertheless, I would argue that keeping any kind of beasts in captivity has many disadvantages. For instance, being kept in cages, animals may suffer from some mental disorders. For example, animals which were raised in captivity have different behavior from their wild counterparts, such as anxiety which is a result of being in one place. Furthermore, the size of the muscles could be reduced by lying down in zoos where they are fed by the animals' park authorities. Because of this, they can not search for food and prey or run. Moreover, they have been created to be in a free place not being in cages so the matter could be harmful to them in any kind of captivity.
To conclude, although it seems true that zoos can be beneficial to not only animals but also humans, I highly believe if humans let them leave in nature animals would benefit more.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79276315789 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53300367162 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546052631579 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5599025121 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354761065588 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121132782346 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625759636777 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220820096928 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594521388356 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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