Some people thinks that some employees should recieve more salary and it is good for country and others say it is not fair.Discuss both sides and write your opinion.

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Some people thinks that some employees should recieve more salary and it is good for country and others say it is not fair.
Discuss both sides and write your opinion.

Nowadays, the amount of salary earned by various employees is one of the most controversial issues in every country.
Some economy experts believe that much money should allocate to especial careers while others claim that must not exist substantial gap for the proportion of wages among different occupations. In this essay I will discuss both side of argument and also my opinion below.
Although many experts believe that the high profile people with white collar careers such as demanding jobs including president, mayor and etc. which consume a lot of time and energy ought to be in priority of receiving more salary in comparison with manual and simple activities( for instance blue collar employees as staff), according to the equality fact, it is better all the positions take advantage of same perks and monthly salary without any obvious difference. Furthermore, it does not matter how difficult is the job, the factors of job satisfaction which is associated with the proportion of salary is more important for employees and consequently because of causal relationship between the amount of happiness in workplace and their attitude about their country and government, It is clear that this situation would be better not only for country but also for the governments.

To sum up, in my opinion it is crucial for authorities to take the equality fact as a fundamental aspect and indispensible dimension in to their consideration in order to provide a better quality of life for their populace and general public otherwise due to the lack of job satisfaction and increasing the gap between poor and wealthy households will be widespread in the foreseeable future.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... quality of life for their populace and general public otherwise due to the lack of job satisf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16176470588 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87435113785 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595588235294 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.504426986 49.4020404114 260% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 200.571428571 106.682146367 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.8571428571 20.7667163134 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216426258695 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902376624055 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421513514305 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11318792096 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600272264665 0.056905535591 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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