Some people use technology or internet for keep in touch with others and get new events . Do you think that is advantage outweigh disadvantage?
Major Internet applications of social media have enabled users to contact each other and get to know the everyday occurrences in the global context. There are obvious benefits of this significant change but, to be fair, the worries and confusions are quite annoying to those heavily dependent on cyber space.
In regard to human communication, technology has played and integral part in our daily lives. First, by using technology devices such as mobile phones and tablets, people, especially elders, are now able to keep in touch with their family members regardless geographic distance. In fact, before the invention such as smart devices, delivering and receiving a message required physical travel, costing unnecessary money, effort and time. Second, the Internet has offered effective and efficient ways to communicate with others. Social networking, for example, have become an Internet platform where users are able to instantly reach international friends and even professional connections, which promotes better social behavior and strengthens social connections. Especially, technology is one of the best areas for take new events in anywhere and anytime.
On the other hand, despite the big afore mentioned benefits, the resultant problem pressure on the society pollution would be far more significant once the benefits of using mobile. First, all people using mobile phones would likely correspond with a tremendous pollution strain on a country. The inconsiderate use of these devices can be particularly nosing such as when loud conservation on mobile phones in public spaces disrupt the tranquility of a peaceful chat with companies, meaning that there would be less input to develop other important areas such as the healthcare system and transport infrastructure. Second, using of mobile phones would tempt many young people including those who are not academically inclined or show no interest in other areas, thereby adding great burdens for government and other people. It, instead, would be a more using technology viable option if the resources focus on supporting academic and working areas.
In conclusion, despite the advantages of long-distance human connection and conveniences. Technology has many some drawbacks. It is, thus, hoped that netizens, especially the young generation, should consider using it sensibly while maintaining their academic and working, avoid being banned from using technology in the future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, thus, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2078.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60107816712 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89812443843 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628032345013 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1429735464 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.875 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1875 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25413202746 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759335453699 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467626213591 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12785293124 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418196947447 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 78.4519038076 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.