Some people use technology to take advice for their medical problems rather than seeing to doctor. Why this is so. It is positive or negative development according to you.
Owing to technology, everything becomes easily accessible. Some people take advantage of technology as they discuss their health issues with experts on the internet rather than going to them. This trend increasing in our society as people have a busy schedule. In my opinion, it is a positive development as taking medical prescription online save time as well as energy. But it has some disadvantages also so discussed below.
Technology brings people close enough that they can discuss their problems with a number of people at once and can share their experiences so that others can take advantage of this. Taking online prescription save time, as there is no need to run to the hospitals and set a queue to meet the doctors. Using technology, people can take advice from foreign experts rather than considering only native ones. Various online websites are now available, where experts and people can communicate with each other, here helpdoctor.com is worth mentioning as it provides a common platform for everyone.
However, it may have some disadvantages, as in serious health issues such as cancer or in other deadly diseases where the doctor can visually check and do some tests, is not possible online. In those cases, people should visit the experts and get proper medical care. Under specialist vision, the patient gets recover much faster. Although technology provides us various advantages, sometimes under certain circumstances, it may worsen the situation. For example, in case of heart attack patient should rush to the hospital rather than taking online medical care. In some medical issues such as cold, fever people should take advice online but in other deadly cases, people should visit to doctors so that can take better medication.
In conclusion, no doubt technology has a huge role and brings everything closer, it has its own merits and demerits, we can take only certain medication and healthcare pieces of advice such as what we should eat to reduce the weight, not in other serious issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 691, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'doctor'.
Suggestion: doctor
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1303030303 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68150314876 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542424242424 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0476431919 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.8125 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335002145185 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103648569635 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075142859785 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197849005205 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718215815262 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.