Average number of workers think that working in one organisation gives more benefits. In contrast other workers think that the changing of one place to another place will gives us a different type of experience. Working in an organisation is the main important thing for several people. Some people are more comfortable for changing work places. But some are not intrested in moving because of their friendly environment. In my opinion, changing from one organisation to another will gives us more experience.
The greatest benefit of working in the same organisation help us to move easily in work place and the good environment which we liked the most. In any type of organisation we feel uncomfortable for 1week. Then after, we can adjust ourselves very easily. Many of employees will become friends and there will be a nice environment. This enables us to make a long time relation with colleagues and we move with them very easily. Due to this type of working we can lack our confidence while speaking to new ones and we cannot extend our knowledge. For instance, the work in company to company may vary. If we are in only one company then we cannot known the other technologies.
The main advantage of shifting from one company to another will improves our knowledge and increase the friends that we have. In this way, we can easily mingle ourselves with new ones. And we are ready to work in any type of environment. So that, we are capable to stand in any type of situation. For example, My brother works in different type of organisationsand now he will easily became close to new people and he learnt different types of technologies.
I conclude that, ever organisation teaches us many things. We can learnt from that and improve our skills. In my point of view, moving from one work place to another is more beneficial than sitting in one organisation. By this we can able to move with others very easily and the relations should be increased.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...ne organisation gives more benefits. In contrast other workers think that the changing o...
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Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...ging of one place to another place will gives us a different type of experience. Work...
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Line 2, column 599, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he work in company to company may vary. If we are in only one company then we cann...
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Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'become'
Suggestion: become
... of organisationsand now he will easily became close to new people and he learnt diffe...
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Line 4, column 67, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'learn'
Suggestion: learn
...nisation teaches us many things. We can learnt from that and improve our skills. In my...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77581120944 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77481573001 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454277286136 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5088729364 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3913043478 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7391304348 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65217391304 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236529931451 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843823371726 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750434579414 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161904375258 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813296485241 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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