Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think it is better to work for different organisations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Working helps a person to gather knowledge and living a healthy life. In this purpose, some people think that whole life work in the same company its good for employees. However, others group believes that, it's far better if a person join in different organizations in his work career. According to my viewpoint, I think employees should work or join in different company to accumulate more knowledge, idea and experience. In this essay, I will discusse both modes with my opinion.
Firstly, working environment is an essential factor for employees some people think that, if a person comfort with his present working environment then he should not change his working organization. Moreover, work in a same company can bring some advantage for worker such as they can get promotion in their company. For example, a government employee does not use to change his company, because he doesn't want to take a risk in his work life as he is very fascinating about his promotion in the same organization. So, we can say like that some people don't want any variation in his life.
On the other hand, some people support that work in several groups or workplace can help an employee to gain more knowledge and work experience. Furthermore, it helps to reduce boredom at the workplace. For instance, different company has their various working policies, also their different environment. So, it's useful to a worker to learn how to cooperate with task and people in diverse situation. However, we knew that, same work and place make people lazy and bring boredom with work. Overall, it is very important for workers to change their workplace.
To sum up, above all discussion, we can understand that which view is essential for employee. So, my opinion is every worker should take a risk in their life by changing their job place. Because, it can bring some exciting and thrilling in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67364889944 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1016881093 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1111111111 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32461468008 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113427585353 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610244478692 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212437178971 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450660709974 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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