In some places, money earned from tourism has become an important part of the economy.
What are the advantaged and disadvantages of relying on tourism as a major source of revenue?
Some counties with many places to visiting by tourist makes tourism as foremost income than other sectors. It have some positive impacts for country and residents. However, it positive impacts is followed by some disadvantages.
To begin with, country and region earn some good impacts by relying on tourism sector. Firstly, it dramatically increasing income. It happens because people now days need holiday or recreation to relief stress that is got from work. People needs of holiday is increase, while work pressure risen. Then, how people treating themselves slightly start switching on convenience, enjoyment and inner satisfication than saving all their income. Secondly, tourism can boost of developing region. For instance, residents in rural area get more and more opportunities on leaning foreign languages than region that are not focus in tourism. More knowledges will be transferred to rural residents and impact to their intellectual. Moreover, people who does not has formal education can earn income and decrease the number of unemployment by selling handcraft as souvenirs, open hotels or cottages and some restaurant.
On other hand, there are some disadvantages by overhanging on tourism sector. Some countries will have fragile economy. For instance, tourism will dramatically decrease if some incident limit people mobility. Therefore, visitors decreased and impact on economic health. Secondly, foreign culture can replaced original culture if region and resident are not ready to receive it properly.
In conclusion, there are some advantages on economic and welfare rate. However it will be followed by disadvantages. Which is the advantages have huge impact to society economic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63565891473 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88290029584 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589147286822 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4345762631 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186903261248 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586164056025 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627258235135 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11618908021 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210305931364 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.54 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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