Some poeple work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In a corporate office, there are two types of people. One are those, who join as a fresher and work there till the retirement. While there is another category, who stays for quite a short period and then change the company. Though staying in a copmany or switching jobs after short period of time is an individual's personal choice, I believe, one must keep changing the organizations. In this essay, I will discuss both choices and will elaborate why it is up to people own choice to choose the same workplace all their life or working in different oganizations.
To begin with, there are many people who do not like changing jobs. Because of the comfort zone, they prefer to stay in an organization for long time. For instance, some of my collegues from my old company were used to say that we are familier with all the policies and people in this organisation so we dont want to other place. They never wanted to ruin their comfort zone, so they decided to stick with one employer.
On the contrary, people who like to explore and need constant changes in their life, gets bored by working at same place. In addition to that, when a person switches his job, he gets good amount of salary hike. These are the main reasons why people want to switch their job more often. For instance, I have also switched four jobs in six years and I can see the difference between my friends and my salary. Moreover, I get chance to work on latest technologies whereas my friends are still working on old one.
To sum up, working in a same organisation all their life or switching jobs frequently is an invividual's personal choice. Everyone choose this according to their interest. While working in same company throughout the life can be a peaceful journey, switching jobs can provide good wages and opportunities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 283, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...a copmany or switching jobs after short period of time is an individuals personal choice, I be...
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Line 1, column 301, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...hing jobs after short period of time is an individuals personal choice, I believe, one must ke...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s and people in this organisation so we dont want to other place. They never wanted ...
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Line 13, column 131, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'chooses'.
Suggestion: chooses
...n invividuals personal choice. Everyone choose this according to their interest. While...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, still, then, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71159874608 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5729593258 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570532915361 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7488586728 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4117647059 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275348259323 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082223628075 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772503228605 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169231749906 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460187612146 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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