As the people live long life,so the retirement age of workers should be raised as per to few individuals.according to me opposite is true in term of following causes.
To start with the strength, until the age of 60 individuals are enough capable to achieve their task effectively and efficiently because in this age, workers are able to do work but, if the working age has been increased then it can lead to some problem in order to delay in work.so that's why the retirement age should not be raised. Moreover, retirement leads to recruitment of new employees.since, they come with their innovative ideas which is used in growth of nation rapidly. for example, in research field with recruiting of young scientist have number of ideas and skills which they can implement in their inventions for therefore the researches which will result into the development and growth of country.
Furthermore,in the era of modernization a single task is achieved through the new techniques which could only well used by new generation. whereas, the age of 60 are unknown about it.Therefore, the age of retirement should we decline instead of increasing it. Even, the adult employees are more trained and well educated than the old workers.
In conclusion, retirement age should not be increased as it can leads to delay in work.whereas,with recruitment of new workers it order to develop the nation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03896103896 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15745598658 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.8224510368 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.5 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.875 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.625 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22884717232 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933016405542 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755481929968 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143648231358 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048331623805 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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