Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports?
Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.
There have been researches that countless individuals are eager to participate in adventurous sports even though they are aware of the risks involved. Many hazardous sports are attractive to people - foremost the young people, they like to challenge their abilities and potential. And this essay will discuss some precautions that, if adopted and followed, can mitigate the dangers associated with these sports.
On the one hand, the urge to become noted by the public drags more people to try these adventures. To be precise, players can become the centre of attraction among the public when they participate in daredevil activities such as high speed racing, ice hockey, or rugby. If they have the skills or win in a competition, they can get the monetary reward and fame from sports companies over a night. If they can sign contracts, they will have an abundant amount of money income and astonishing fame allowing them to become global celebrities.
Another reason, which may be the predominant reason for the popularity of some dangerous sports such as skydiving, paragliding, bungee jumping and scuba diving, is that because these activities are attracted. People feel elation with things they are scared of and want to conquer their phobias and fears. In fact, they may not really like that feeling of fear, but they do enjoy the feeling of conquering, overcoming fear. Actually, they believe that these sports will boost their confidence and make them intrepid.
In cases of dealing with the risks involved in such sports, no factor other than safety is to be given utmost importance. To mitigate the dangers involved in these sports, the most effective measure is to use proper safety gear and equipment such as harness, ropes and specialized clothing. Before doing the sport, make sure all equipment is in good working condition and used appropriately. Bar players from practicing or competing without the necessary protective gear.
Besides that, players must undergo rigorous tests to ensure they are physically and mentally conditioned by professional coaches before participating in dangerous sports. Also, some restrictions should be imposed for these sports and they should be related to age, as small children and adolescent should be avoided from practising this kind of sports because they may be still young to deal with their dangers.
In summary, as risks are associated with a price tag, strict precautions need to be in place to stay alive. In conclusion, it is safe to practice any sport you like with enough planning and adequate training, no matter how dangerous it is, you just have to measure the risks and get over them with gradual skill improvements.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, if, may, really, so, still, in conclusion, in fact, in summary, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2262.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 437.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.176201373 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69800037464 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556064073227 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1623797986 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.052631579 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261547825391 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772874240616 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546574314713 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144584949078 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563706271128 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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