some universities now Offer their courses on the internet so that people can study online. is this a positive or negative development.
Due to the advancement of technology, it has become possible to provide courses online through internet and some educational institutions are providing this an opportunity to study online. This essay will highlight that this approach has numerous positive aspects despite having a few inevitable negatives.
A range of factors explain that studying online encompasses some drawbacks. First of all, time to time assistance is not involved in online study as people are not able to clear their doubts pertaining to their district topics. Along with this, e-learning does not incorporate any kind of relation between teacher and students in which educatees can not share their ideas and they have to just rely on written communication study. Apart from this, children are more likely to become couch potato by using technical devices excessively as a result they would be less sociable and get obese.
However, e-learning has plethora of benefits to society. The first and foremost positive side of it geographical barriers would not affect to study as well as students do not have to confront traveling problems to reach on any particular place. Besides, disabled people would be benefitted the most from online learning as they can accses study material at their home. Moreover, any kind of information can be retrieved within a few seconds anywhere and anytime, which also reduce the burden of paper work, so it is immensely beneficial for community.
To conclude, although i consider that enrolling in studying online courses has some inevitable drawbacks, i believe that it's overall positives are far more to society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, moreover, second, so, well, apart from, kind of, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31274131274 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77723486526 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0475858791 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.090909091 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279540115115 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935652256417 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536343613914 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162854959283 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357311981984 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Due to the advancement of technology, it has become possible to provide course...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ncompasses some drawbacks. First of all, time to time assistance is not involved ...
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... their district topics. Along with this, e-learning does not incorporate any kind...
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Line 5, column 450, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...en communication study. Apart from this, children are more likely to become couc...
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Line 5, column 469, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...udy. Apart from this, children are more likely to become couch potato by using t...
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Line 9, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... reach on any particular place. Besides, disabled people would be benefitted the ...
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...thin a few seconds anywhere and anytime, which also reduce the burden of paper wo...
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...ficial for community. To conclude, although i consider that enrolling in st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, moreover, second, so, well, apart from, kind of, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31274131274 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77723486526 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0475858791 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.090909091 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279540115115 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935652256417 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536343613914 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162854959283 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357311981984 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.