Some university students prefer to live in a dormitory, while others like to rent an apartment near their campus . which place do you think is better for students to live in and why? Include details and examples to support your explaination.
University students often have various choice of places to live. Some of them prefer to live in a dorm while others prefer to live in apartment. For many reasons, i believe that i will choose living in an apartment.
First of all, living in an apartment make you more comfortable and private because of its large space while the small space of the dorm restrict your activities, especially, your studying. You hardly concentrate fully on studying by virtue of distraction from many factors around you. A lot of students discomfort that their roommates turn music too loud or invite their friends to room at unreasonable times . For same reasons , you can do all things without any complaints if you live in apartment.
Second of all, the health and the time factor will make you consider about place to live.At many universities, students don’t be allowed to cook in the dorm , that means it will very bad for health if you have to eat outside during four or five years. Besides, students must back to dorm in a timely manner so if you want to have part-time jobs in order to get more money, renting an apartment is a good choice.
Lastly, in term of economy, it is said that the cost of renting an apartment is much more expensive. It is only partly right, you actually can share the large apartment with some friends in order to reducing economic pressure. Besides, using public transportation help you lots in saving money.
In conclusion, both of options have benefits, but from considering many factors, i think it would be better for students live in apartment than live in a dorm.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, first, if, lastly, second, so, while, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74100719424 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61634338719 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586330935252 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4363261937 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.384615385 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362045555048 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13246265623 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070922751993 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210954952032 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793052877406 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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