From the ancient centuries agriculture plays crucial role in mankind’s life in order to feed people, even in early years in spite of emerging many innovative ways. However, many people all around the world are faced with famine. In this essay I’ll try to give solution about this problem.
The world in 21st century people want to feel confident about simple and primary need because of the vast development in agriculture industries. Whereas mentioned developments, some population are still hungry as they most initial need of their routine life. The reasons of this problem are some countries have old and unusable technology, since they don’t have enough money to buy or even repair those facilities. In addition, some countries are sanctioned by the other powerful nations, then the can’t facilitate the agricultural amenities. Nevertheless, some countries have harsh or scorching weather that made the agriculture impossible in those areas.
There are some solutions for aid poor nations in order to upgrade their agricultural machines in order to abundant harvest. First of all, wealthy countries can give poorer ones’ financial help to them to buy up-to-date agricultural machines. On the other hand, powerful nations can send weak ones some sophisticated farmers to teach others their experiences about new methods of agriculture. Likewise, countries can have communication in this case to get profit from both countries. For instance, a country can give contrary to another country and ask them about other science that they are stronger.
In conclusion, I wrote about the both problem and solution about some country’s famine in these year in spite of new inventions in agricultural case and whole countries around the world must help others to give and deliver advances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'centuries'' or 'century's'?
Suggestion: centuries'; century's
From the ancient centuries agriculture plays crucial role in manki...
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Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this year' or 'these years'?
Suggestion: this year; these years
...ion about some country's famine in these year in spite of new inventions in agricultu...
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Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lp others to give and deliver advances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, likewise, nevertheless, so, still, then, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44522968198 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90465382139 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579505300353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6655240068 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.071428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214285509826 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819165303325 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654384055128 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149282531484 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052736140659 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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