In terms of communication, many people believe that it will be more powerful for the information to be exchanged in speech instead of in writing. Personally, I do not completely agree with this idea, and I will explain why.
On the one hand, it is true that in various situations, speaking is an optimal way in which information can be transferred energetically and immediately. By integrating intonation, gestures or face expressions, speakers can indicate information enthusiastically with instant effects while written language requires a certain amount of time for readers to read and absorb the content. Besides, in extremely urgent cases, when information needs to be grasped immediately such as emergency evacuation, verbal contact often appears to be superior to written communication because it does not require any writing tools, or when information receivers are people who are not able to read and write like young children.
Nonetheless, almost all the important contracts or agreements between individuals, organizations or countries are guaranteed by written papers, and signatures are usually regarded as official confirmation. It is because that without being recorded, verbal language itself is sometimes untrustworthy and fragile, and the deal is more likely to be broken if there is no visible evidence between the two sides. Of course in many less formal situations, oral negotiations are firm enough but generally, people are not legally obliged until the contract is signed. Moreover, writing appears to be more effective than speaking when the information is too complicated or needs to be grasped precisely, namely doctor’s prescriptions, machinery manuals or regulations.
Overall, I do not subscribe to the theory that spoken words have a more powerful effect than written words because all means of communication are equally important, depending on our intentions and the circumstances.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, moreover, nonetheless, so, thus, while, of course, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70383275261 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29229391356 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623693379791 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4371684175 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.7 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170323383784 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653985918007 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787079967605 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129930443139 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931173154005 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
These days , it is believed…
These days , it is believed that communicate by speaking is more important than communicate by writing letter or message . Although , this idea is reasonable to some extent , i would argue that using written communication .
On the one hand , i am convinced that communicate by writing letter or message has some advantages . Firstly , content of conversation can be saved easily . In my opinion , the letter or message which is written on paper or smartphones may be saved for a long time . Accordingly , people could review their memory everytime . Secondly , people would not take many time to meet directly with each other . To be honestly , Going out to the coffee shop where people meet their friends could take many hours . Therefore , the majority of people don not want to meet friends because they are so tired after a busy day .
On the other hand , it is understandable why most people choose keep in touch by speaking . On top of that , i believed that meeting at the coffee shop where people could talk directly with each other is very happy . The conversation is more interesting because people have more opportunity to show their emotion . Furthermore , people would avoid disease about eyes which is caused by smartphones . Cellphones are abused could cause many consequences . For examples : Low vision or blindness . In addition to , reducing time on smartphones could help user avoid phones addiction .
In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support people keeping in touch by calls or meeting, i strongly believe that this policy is not without drawsbacks and thus should not be implemented by the state.
These days , it is believed…
These days , it is believed that communicate by speaking is more important than communicate by writing letter or message . Although , this idea is reasonable to some extent , i would argue that using written communication .
On the one hand , i am convinced that communicate by writing letter or message has some advantages . Firstly , content of conversation can be saved easily . In my opinion , the letter or message which is written on paper or smartphones may be saved for a long time . Accordingly , people could review their memory everytime . Secondly , people would not take many time to meet directly with each other . To be honestly , Going out to the coffee shop where people meet their friends could take many hours . Therefore , the majority of people don not want to meet friends because they are so tired after a busy day .
On the other hand , it is understandable why most people choose keep in touch by speaking . On top of that , i believed that meeting at the coffee shop where people could talk directly with each other is very happy . The conversation is more interesting because people have more opportunity to show their emotion . Furthermore , people would avoid disease about eyes which is caused by smartphones . Cellphones are abused could cause many consequences . For examples : Low vision or blindness . In addition to , reducing time on smartphones could help user avoid phones addiction .
In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support people keeping in touch by calls or meeting, i strongly believe that this policy is not without drawsbacks and thus should not be implemented by the state.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, moreover, nonetheless, so, thus, while, of course, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70383275261 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29229391356 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623693379791 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4371684175 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.7 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170323383784 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653985918007 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787079967605 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129930443139 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931173154005 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.