Sport is becoming a business with high income for professionals and more companies have involved in financial and in other ways. It is a positive or negative development?
In recent years, the business of sports has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although this trend is not without advantages, the downsides will be far more significant.
There are a number of advantages when sport is a job creator and a big-league economic driver. First, since both professionals and companies can reap tangible benefits, the business of sports is a win-win strategy. In fact, on the one hand, the business of sports allows players to make a killing from endorsement or non-official matches, vice versa, companies also earn a big amount of money thanks to entrance fees, advertisements and other services. Second, by encouraging companies to finance this industry, the government can release itself from the burden of national budget. This means that individual companies will replace government duties in investment and development of the sports sector, both in terms of facilities and infrastructure saving a great deal of national budget which in turn will be harnessed in other key areas for the purpose of the sustainable development.
Nevertheless, the disadvantages of this trend should not be neglected. First, since individual companies often have unhealthy policies to benefit themselves, they can make sport matches not transparent. For instance, private companies may resort to sports fraud in order to reap economic and political benefits, which is unfair to both players and audiences. Second, it is a good chance that athletes are prone to serious injuries, like bone fracture or head trauma, if they are required to play too many non-official matches, which potentially shortens the lifespan of their careers.
In conclusion, the negative implications of this trend are by far significant. By considering all the pros and cons, the government can find the best approach to prevent such companies from crossing the line.
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- Writing task 1 11
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- writing task 1 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 550, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., the government can release itself from the burden of national budget. This mean...
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Line 2, column 688, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...es in investment and development of the sports sector, both in terms of facilities and...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'sport'.
Suggestion: sport
...stance, private companies may resort to sports fraud in order to reap economic and pol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, as for, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34237288136 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03114163181 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572881355932 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9927772008 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.230769231 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19200878409 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621010649511 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417464476065 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101583517511 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460627901766 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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