Students should choose a university major that prepares them for high-paying careers. To what extend do you agree with this statement.
Education and employment rate has changed a lot from the last couple of year. Many Undergraduates are now thinking to pursue higher education in colleges, who can train them for affluent salaries. Although, a wealthy lifestyle is much important nowadays, however, I disagree with the above statement and I will outline both arguments, will provide my opinion in the following essay.
Affluent income brings wealth for future and for future generations. With High ,salaried individuals can buy things they want and can fulfil the desires of their families. For example, if parents’ salaries are high students can go for better education in good colleges, which will help them to achieve higher goals. Universities help students to provides good placements in big companies. Therefore, choosing a high-end university can be a brilliant idea to bring fortune in future.
Nevertheless, there are certain factors which can bring high salaries, even though, one is not studying in major universities. Firstly, passion can bring any business down to the top. If there is a passion inside a person to do something, there can reach the goal where they want, does not matter from which college he studied. To illustrate it more, A writer who has the passion to write can write far better than a content writer who is working, unsatisfactory in a 9 am to 5 pm job, only for few errands. If one does not have a passion for work, they may end up with mental illness and stress-related problems. Another Major factor is satisfaction. Satisfaction not only brings a healthy mindset but only increase efficiency in work. As a result, Individuals can bring more power to work and can bring more money in their life.
In conclusion, Students believe that major colleges with providing high income are a wonderful choice. In my view, if a person has a passion for work, they can increase the business low to top, no matter which university they studied.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01234567901 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84132389484 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561728395062 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7928974026 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2222222222 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169254373742 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583472130596 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460569926541 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116704782539 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528814083571 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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