For the successful development of a country, it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children (five to ten years old) than to spend money on universities.
Undoubtedly, in this modern time governments have limited resources and they have to spend their budgets in right ways. In my opinion, government should use its money on universities. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in following essay.
To begin with, students of universities have a lot of desires and dreams about their life and they want to change everything in their life and solve all problems in not their home country but in the globe. this is obvious that university should has a responsibility about its students and should help them to follow their dream and achieve their goals. Without a good educational programs and well educated professors, student's talent can be wasted and their energy can be disappeared. For example, when I was in university, I always wanted to get to the doctoral program and I spend my whole time in library for studying and research. But after a while I noticed that our professors are not as good as enough to teach in doctoral level. Thus, I gradually lust my energy and focus and I decided to migrate to another country to continue my academic career. there is no doubt that my country has been spent a lot of money for student education from elementary school until graduate program but low quality of university programs led students to think about migration. this wasting money and talented people for a country can be very harmful and make government weak because of eventual effects of young educated people.
Second, students who study in the universities are more creative than anyone else in community. They can be more useful than others in the country. If government spend money on university and improve quality of educational systems and other facilities as well as equipment this can be a start point for having a positive result in the future. we all know that children have a massive attention from their parent and always their parent spent a lot of money on their education. Instead students in universities are independent person so they need more support and if government and university support them they can be successful in their study and have a positive impact in community after graduation.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that governments should spend their money on university. This is because this will avoid migration of talented people and and because student in the universities can improve life of community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, thus, well, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95812807882 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74742737028 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477832512315 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 642.6 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1596040125 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.833333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267890219717 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927138406999 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700202265014 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171485954599 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390375202821 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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