Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Well-known as well as professional sports people are paid astronomical income compared to other crucial careers. Whereas some people have recognized this assertion a fair situation, others are against this view and have found it unjustifiable. To my perspective, I side with the latter view relying on some potent reasons and valid instances.
To begin with, those people who claim that it is not far to fairness that these super star sports people are paid lucratively, are of the opinion that these versatile sports people exchange hardness for glory which is not something easy to achieve. To put it more simply, they are always required to be fit, healthy and ready since they deserve to be paid to this high amount of money. To dig more, these people add as these champions such as Ronaldo and Messi would bring fame and reputation to their countries, it is needless to question why they earn highly unbelievable amount of money.
However, I am of the opinion that other key careers including teaching and medicine ought to give more importance compared to sports-related professions. It is far apparent to mention that teachers form students characters , doctors give life to people, hence there should be as financially worthwhile as sports careers.Additionaly and equally important, I hold this belief that to terminate this counterfeit idea which is believed by first group of people, governments and local communities supposed to take wise actions in order to eliminate this pay gap since these careers are valuable besides paramount to keep our society alert and at a good health condition.
By way of conclusion, while it is highly true that some super star champions specifically football players exchange their hardworking for their affluent jobs, I believe other prominent careers must be considered as money-making as sports profession since they are fundamental as well as leading part of our society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, however, if, so, well, whereas, while, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20257234727 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92195210027 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594855305466 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.876333888 49.4020404114 253% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.777777778 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5555555556 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293545945003 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11937980841 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497207624159 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162653481964 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477381572055 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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