“Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions.” Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
There exist a plethora of crucial industries and professions that brings great contributions to humanity's life, with sports being one of which and surrounded by question of its justifiability of the fact that specializers in such a field achieve higher financial success than equivalent experts in others. This essay will give an insight to both sides of the controversy aforementioned and state my opinion that sport industry professionals deserve their higher income.
It seems that the general consensus among people who are against such astronomical payout for sport stars is that sport is not that important as an industry which is of paramount importance to human society. They believe that without the presence of such celebrities, men can still live happily without any difference. However, it should not be forgotten that among the vast wealth of sport participants and cutthroat competition, only a few select sporting prowess could rise to prominence, making a name for themselves and participating in large-scale matches in order to be paid, which must have then involved great scarification of multiple multitudes whereas there are great numbers of practitioners involving in other fields. Besides, being a part of the entertainment sector, this industry also imparts great value on a person's mental well-being, thus reaffirming its significance.
Alongside the above listed reasons, the role of sport practitioners as themselves in the society are also justifiable for their great monetary rewards. Firstly, the thrills emitted from watching such great sport matches, along with the name of celebrities being symbols of sportsmanship, would help to do wonders in propagandizing of sports participation and fitness. Being a subject of newsworthiness and virile physique attached to prestigious prizes playing its role as an immense source of admiration for young people to inspire and take part in fitness activities. Moreover, sportsmanship is also viewed as fame and honour, in which sport patriates fighting in international matches are for the glory and recognition of their home country as a whole.
In conclusion, sport professionals can earn great monetary rewards for their participation, but regarding their role in society, the competition they have to face and their minor population, they are justified.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 19, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'consensus'.
Suggestion: consensus
...their higher income. It seems that the general consensus among people who are against such astro...
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Line 2, column 430, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... participants and cutthroat competition, only a few select sporting prowess coul...
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Line 2, column 436, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cipants and cutthroat competition, only a few select sporting prowess could rise...
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Line 2, column 827, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...is industry also imparts great value on a persons mental well-being, thus reaffirming its...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, then, thus, well, whereas, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51955307263 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19369893194 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58938547486 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.7624572514 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.636363636 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5454545455 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18524062428 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676605279794 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322541246423 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110451613444 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292019572638 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 19, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'consensus'.
Suggestion: consensus
...their higher income. It seems that the general consensus among people who are against such astro...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 430, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... participants and cutthroat competition, only a few select sporting prowess coul...
^^
Line 2, column 436, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cipants and cutthroat competition, only a few select sporting prowess could rise...
^^
Line 2, column 827, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...is industry also imparts great value on a persons mental well-being, thus reaffirming its...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, then, thus, well, whereas, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51955307263 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19369893194 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58938547486 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.7624572514 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.636363636 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5454545455 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18524062428 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676605279794 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322541246423 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110451613444 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292019572638 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.