I accord that in contemporary time,technology has changed the path individuals intract with each other because new gadgets are invented day by day.Eventhough, technology is a best invention for humankind which covers a 100 miels barrier with in a second. There are several factors which are contributed to differ human relationship.i will discuss my distinct metaphores in forth coming paragraphs.
To initate,humankind live in a technological society. It has deminised metal barrier between human beings.there are various sites which are available across the world as Facebook , Twitter, Skype and so on. They can touch with each other by these sites.For instance,people used to write a letter and present their emotions but had to wait a long time for sending it.furthermore,nowadays to interact with anyone any part of the corner just like a ‘cake walk’
On the contrary side overburden on technology may cause of crisis.Everybody is getting emotionless and sent their invitation greting on social networking sites.all age groups utilise their paramount time on internet,cars and electronic gadgets.children stay far from their parents due to excess load on technology
In culmination,’looking into my Cristal ball’
Technology has overcome distance between ‘nears and dears’ but people have to reduce onus on technology which may not impact on human’s mind.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, may, second, so, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74038461538 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.84418720071 2.80592935109 137% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.711538461538 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 264.098920861 49.4020404114 535% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 238.8 106.682146367 224% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.6 20.7667163134 200% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.8 7.06120827912 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158224345 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066865222677 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576073775642 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746051179341 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555475749285 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.4 13.0946893788 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.94 50.2224549098 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.9 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.98 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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