Team activities can teach more skills for life than other activities which are played alone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics:

Team activities can teach more skills for life than other activities which are played alone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Team activities are gaining popularity over the entire world. Presently, it has been extremely debatable wheather group activities can inculcate more skills to the people than playing individually. Here, I would like to accord with the given statement.

There are manifold points to endorse my point of view. To commence with, individual can learn worthwhile tips and strategies while playing in a group. For instance, every individual has different knowledge and skills about a specific task. As a result, the individuals can broaden their horizon of knowledge while working in a group. What is more, group work makes the players disciplined and responsible towards their goals. Apart from this, they learn superior traits such as leadership skills and coordination in a group. Hence, the players become noble character.

Further emphasising on my point of view, players know about their strength and weakness while working in a team. Hence, the performance of the individuals get improved in a group work. Besides this, players feel safer and energetic in a group as it boosts the confidence level of the individuals. By contrast, others have conflicting views.

They think that playing alone would me more beneficial than team activities.Individual activities made the person maverick as they are more dedicated towards their goal accomplishment. Apart from this, group activities lack competition owing to which people get discouraged towards their goals.

To recapitulate, it is well said that, "Unity is strength".Undeniably, group activities have few demerits. However, the benefits of team work outweigh the demerits.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, however, if, so, well, while, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.592 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29138511876 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2136337233 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6666666667 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8888888889 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210980326339 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06196282641 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645525283817 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125448107206 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076152236239 0.056905535591 134% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.55 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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