Technology
Technology is everywhere. The development of Technology is increasing in every field such as medicine, research, educational, communication and so on. Technology development somehow influenced children by the way of it's invention like computers, mobile phones, tablets, Play station etc. Let us see some of the advantage and disadvantage.
Nowadays, Modern technology made easy for children to develop their creativity, entertainment and education. They love to learn in the form of digital which helps them to understand better. Due to pandemic, online classes are conducted everywhere. This made easy for them to learn their lessons from their home. Children engaged in social media, get to know various things about current activities and it help them to show their talent.
In few cases, the technology which made beneficial for the children turns out into addiction. They spend their time in front of computer and mobile. This affects their health and affect their eyes. Children's at the age of 10 wear spectacles. A part from that, they addicted in games which stops them to concentrate on themselves. Somehow, they waste their time by spending more time in gadgets.
In the end, Technology is beneficial in large area but using it in a right way is to be considered especially for children's.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... things about current activities and it help them to show their talent. In ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s beneficial in large area but using it in a right way is to be considered especially for chil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, such as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26794258373 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93922475263 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626794258373 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5540608571 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8125 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0625 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236359306276 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994304011662 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154724246308 0.0667982634062 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173960199395 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108012165884 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.