Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today. Are these shows a good method of finding talented people, or are they just entertainment.
The shows looking for talented people have become well-known recently. Although some people suppose that televised shows are merely for entertainment. In my opinion, the talent show is an advantageous method to give a chance to people who want to be renowned for their exceptional abilities.
There are several rationales to acknowledge that a talent show is an opportunity to appeal a myriad of people with their outstanding talent. The most considerable reason is that when it comes to a talent show, people who register have outstanding talent. For instance, in a talent show in America called America Got Talent, which is a well-known televised show worldwide, there are a myriad of people who participate and show their remarkable Performances to the audience. Subsequently, their talent can flourish throughout many rounds of a competition.
Another compelling reason is that talent shows are the standard of a completed and successful organization, which is something that all competitors expect. In various talent shows, there are scores of sponsors who want to advertise their productions and Capitalize on a televised talent show to give a sponsorship for the award. As a result, the prize for talent shows is usually extremely prestigious, which is a major factor to attract a large number of potential competitors to the show.
In conclusion, I believe that televised talent shows are a panacea for people who have a resilient desire and a gifted talent to take part. In addition, I suggest that the government should take action to promote the talent shows and to ensure all of the benefits for people standing out for their extraordinary talents .
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...ding out for their extraordinary talents .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19330855019 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04495129601 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486988847584 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9731020523 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.416666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42032007229 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.210326634487 0.084324248473 249% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062186195833 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305028647166 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433689124123 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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