Television has improved the quality of life for the ordinary person.
Do you agree or disagree?
Television rather than being merely a recreational and amusing device, consider as paramount communal announcement media. Despite the inevitable drawbacks in tandem with this enticing box, it is agreed that television has been bolstering people’s quality of life. To illustrate this, the role of this media in the field of social training as well as reporting people promptly and precisely will be analyzed.
First of all, television as the pioneer of visual media has revolutionized the practices of public training. For instance, once a novel law becomes legislated in such area like insurance or tax, the first official resource for instructing individuals for the sake of preventing from likely challenges is governmental televisions. This duty of television will be more pivotal in certain condition such as war, insofar as in the Vietnam War, school subjects were educated to pupils through television due to critical ambiance of that era. Thus, the significance of television for developing the level of one’s life is irrefutable.
Further and equally important, myriad of people have benefited of television as the most reliable and official source of daily news. Although, broadcasting of rumors and fraudulent news by some television networks undermine its credibility, pursuing the news ranging from political and economical to weather changes can be made genuinely. This thorough perception of global and societal situation leads to a positive impact on human life style.
To sum up, according to importance of television in publicity and social training and creating pastime for the majority of individuals, I once again reaffirm my position that this kind of media has improved the state of people’s lives. Moreover, the integration of television and the Internet will also provide more applications for its viewer in the foreseeable future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51388888889 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08667861569 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621527777778 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5137407026 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.333333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204806580274 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748288734979 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515399640584 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116773056388 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340245351642 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.8 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.