Thanks to the development of air travel and telecommunication, contacts between different parts of the world have developed. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
While many people believe that the global connection is becoming stronger owing to the advancement of communication technology and travel industry, I think that as well as the benefits, this trend brings problem.
On the positive side, the fast rhythm of life requires people to enhance the efficiency of their work, then have more leisure time. With the advance in telecommunications, people can make inquiries by phone instead of traveling long distances. Internet access allow them to perform various and imperative tasks without leaving their offices. Although employees still have to travel everyday for meeting business partners and visiting clients in other cities or even countries, modern transport networks reduce the amount of time they have to spend on commutes. Furthermore, modern means of transport and communication also imply the expansion of people’s social circle. In the past, people’s relationships were limited by physical factors such as geographical distance and low mobility. Nevertheless, one now can travel further and easier thanks to the development of air travel. As the result, people stand more chance to broaden their horizon with cultural diversities and get acquainted with many friends all around the world.
One the negative side, telecommunication technology and travel industry are responsible for the upsurge in lifestyle-related problems. Jobs become demanding and require full commitment. Despite the reduction of official working hour, workers actually work longer and even sacrifice their private life. Because fax, emails and other devices are accessible to their colleagues, customers and supervisors at anytime and everywhere, employees have to respond instantly even when they are having dinner with family and their private room turns into another office apartment.
In conclusion, people now enjoy greater well-being, which is reflected in higher quality of work, less travel-related stress and close contact with friends However, we also have to accept the interruption as an unwanted aspect of convenient communication.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 382, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...Although employees still have to travel everyday for meeting business partners and visit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73225806452 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0828804591 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661290322581 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5879381351 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.928571429 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115556736994 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387043349127 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517531753426 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0620386703685 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318040843944 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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