Music is the most relaxing thing to soothens one's mind and soul. There are variety of music all over the world. In my opinion music is needed to reduce the daily stresses of our lives and it is argued with many listening to song's of one's country's origin is more important than international music. I support the viewpoint that listening to traditional music brings a feeling of patriotism and a connection to our own culture.
Beginning with the importance of music in our life, we all need to listen music at some or the other points of our life. Consider while going to a job from home we can connect the earphones and relax our mind. Music helps in relieving depression, anxiety, nervousness and it helps allievating the mood. There are variety of music like rock, jazz, pop, folklore etc. Some people prefer silent music while other's prefer rock or pop music. Music helps in increasing the happy hormones and makes our day much better. For example, a research article in oxford university has compared effectiveness of music on mind of a person who is busy and works for 12 hours, it was shown that a person not listening to music on daily basis was unhappy compared with the one who was listening on daily basis. Evidence shows the neurological patients while doing exercises and listening to soft music brought changes in the brain signals and help them improving much faster.
Traditional music holds a different place in contrast with international music, listening to traditional music brings a feeling a happiness and a sense of continuing and following one's own culture and customs. In India there are different states and every state has there different traditional songs, if we go to gujarat there people were a dress of there tradition which is called ghagra choli and dance on traditional songs, it brings a feeling of connection and it is so delightful to listen to the soothing music which raises a feeling of patriotism. In international music the pop stars like taylor swift, justin beiber's songs attracts the audiences but those songs can never take place with the traditional folklore songs..
To sum up, music is the soulful and most beautiful thing in our lives and listening to traditional music is much more heartwarming and good when compared with international music.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: ONES
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
... is the most relaxing thing to soothens ones mind and soul. There are variety of mus...
Line 2, column 933, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to improve' or 'improve'.
Suggestion: to improve; improve
...nges in the brain signals and help them improving much faster. Traditional music holds a...
Line 3, column 727, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
...lace with the traditional folklore songs.. To sum up, music is the soulful and mo...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, while, for example, in contrast, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89230769231 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68523613424 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489743589744 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.2946031419 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.471380998311 0.244688304435 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187367868035 0.084324248473 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945350182161 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.337749732576 0.151304729494 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500721335894 0.056905535591 88% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.