There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Music is a global voice which has no boundaries, race, creed or colour. Certain music produced by certain artists have reached even the most furthest rural parts of the world. An example would be Michael Jackson and his songs. Who does not know him? You can find his fans even in places like rural Africa where there is more poverty, corruption and hunger than any of us could ever fathom. His music has healed people and created bridges between diverse cultures. His message was strong, for a world full on love and peace.
Music is also used an a healing tool by many individuals of all ages. They turn to music to heal their pain and sorrow caused by traumatic experiences. Even professional therapists use music to rehabilitate their patients. One can find calming music in modern healing centres too.
Another use of music is to stimulate foetuses to calm them while in their mother womb. Many scientists believe this technique will stimulate brain development of the unborn child as well as make them grow up to be intelligent individuals.
Furthermore, people also find inspiration from music. It may be from their local traditional music or from international music. This depends entirely on the individual and what type of music inspires him/her. Some even idolise certain artists who’s music inspire them to become better human beings in their society.
Therefore, it is wrong to believe traditional music of a country is more important than the international music we hear. It is upto the individual to decide which works best for him/her to inspire or to be enjoyed. Nowadays, even traditional music is being integrated into modern international music which has become very appealing to the public.
Yes, we need music in this world. It makes the world a better place!
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'furthest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: furthest
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Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the furthest'.
Suggestion: most the furthest
...y certain artists have reached even the most furthest rural parts of the world. An example wo...
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Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: an; a
...n love and peace. Music is also used an a healing tool by many individuals of all...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233532934132 0.247107183377 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.170658682635 0.155533422707 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107784431138 0.0946595960268 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0568862275449 0.0501214627716 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0658682634731 0.0437548338989 151% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0868263473054 0.122226691241 71% => OK
Participles: 0.0299401197605 0.0403226058552 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63805273303 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0359281437126 0.0326793684256 110% => OK
Particles: 0.00299401197605 0.00163938923432 183% => OK
Determiners: 0.0688622754491 0.0861772015684 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0179640718563 0.021408717616 84% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0209580838323 0.011925033212 176% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1798.0 1933.35771543 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 316.048096192 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.99333333333 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.33 0.374742101984 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.243333333333 0.28420135186 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14 0.203846283523 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11 0.137316102897 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63805273303 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.037074148 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 64.4685163622 60.7387585426 106% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0891783567 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.6363636364 20.7743622355 66% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7207785956 49.517814964 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7272727273 127.492653851 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6363636364 20.7743622355 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.363636363636 0.814263465372 45% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 37.9696969697 49.1944974215 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.19387755102 1.69124875643 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467011635536 0.332605444948 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0736036044705 0.102741220458 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0745859596851 0.0668466124924 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.502426820796 0.534860350844 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148361817412 0.148594505496 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151894657778 0.134430193775 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117512991542 0.0742795772207 158% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.207956479887 0.324371583561 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0608586922473 0.0638462369009 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27150005164 0.228012699653 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744709064208 0.058150111329 128% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 5.90881763527 186% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 10.4468937876 182% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.