There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development.
In today’s world of science and technology, more and more people have been working or studying from home. From my point of view, I truly believe that it is a positive development.
On the one hand, I concur that utilizing technology in working and studying from home is certainly a positive development. Firstly, the Internet is now widely used around the world and Internet-connected devices such as laptops, smartphones, tablets,… are more affordable so it has never been easier to establish connections between employers and employees or teachers and students. Secondly, taking advance of some of the popular software such as Trello, Telegram, Zoom,… can help managers handle their activities online, easily, and professionally. Moreover, they can also use these tools to give tasks to their employees without a personal meeting.
On the other hand, I am also convinced that with the aids of telecommunication technology, we can now work in some of the hardest situations. Taking the coronavirus disaster in 2020 as a prime example, in some Western countries, people are not allowed to get out of their home and almost every social activities from sport, entertainment, education,… must be postponed but people still find a way to continue their new normal daily life by remote working and studying. Meetings and learning are now held online which not only maintains the social-distancing in this pandemic time but also reduces the traveling cost.
In conclusion, the Internet is now playing a pivotal role in our daily life and thank to this, we can now work as well as study from home conveniently. This is absolutely a magnificent development of humankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17715611635 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603703703704 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.2642210015 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.636363636 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7272727273 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252385372552 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100405753377 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114549323565 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180769885454 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116616204933 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.