There are plenty of options available for spreading news, such as newspapers, radio, TV, Internet and so on. According to your opinion what is the best media to use? Why?
Nowadays there are various sources of ways to spread news in terms of technological development. Those ways are newspapers, radio, TV, internet and other technological devices. In my opinion, the best media in order to spread the news has to be dependent upon the age of the public, but I believe the primary source to spread the news would be the internet. The reason for this is, the internet usage is increasing and more people depend on the internet.
As the technology develops, there are various ways to provide the news to the public. Each item has the specific audiences depending on their ages. For example, newspapers are usually targeting for the older people and whereas TV and radios are for middle aged people. The internet is the mostly used by young ages so it will be easily spread out the news from them.
In my perspective, despite the specific target audiences for each technological device, I believe the best media to spread the news will be the internet. The reason for this is, the internet is usually used by young people and they can spread the news by word of mouth. Since teenagers are having insufficient knowledge to judge whether the information are accurate or reliable, they just spread the news out at ease. From this, other aged people can easily over hear from this news.
Furthermore, nowadays most of people are highly dependent on the internet. For every search for knowledge or information, people just simply search through the internet rather than asking other people. Sometimes the internet provides faster news than that of other form of technological devices and which enhance the dependency of people. Therefore, the internet seems to be the best media to use.
In conclusion, there are increasing technological devices which have developed for various purposes but the most effective media to use as a tool to spread news would be the internet. Due to the fast information availability and young age’s word of mouth is faster than waiting for other forms of technological devices; the internet can deliver the news at rapidity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 23, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...from this news. Furthermore, nowadays most of people are highly dependent on the internet. F...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'whereas', 'as to', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254498714653 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.143958868895 0.155533422707 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0951156812339 0.0946595960268 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0411311053985 0.0501214627716 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0231362467866 0.0437548338989 53% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123393316195 0.122226691241 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0308483290488 0.0403226058552 77% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69514666911 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0334190231362 0.0326793684256 102% => OK
Particles: 0.00514138817481 0.00163938923432 314% => OK
Determiners: 0.123393316195 0.0861772015684 143% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0179948586118 0.021408717616 84% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00514138817481 0.011925033212 43% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2086.0 1933.35771543 108% => OK
No of words: 349.0 316.048096192 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9770773639 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.349570200573 0.374742101984 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.249283667622 0.28420135186 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177650429799 0.203846283523 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123209169054 0.137316102897 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69514666911 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.037074148 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441260744986 0.56093040696 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.7669995755 60.7387585426 74% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3888888889 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5748989442 49.517814964 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.888888889 127.492653851 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.814263465372 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 44.3172556511 49.1944974215 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.96296296296 1.69124875643 116% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411581884824 0.332605444948 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117246915702 0.102741220458 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0889289125244 0.0668466124924 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.5654717567 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14901542661 0.148594505496 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185621006441 0.134430193775 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755997267556 0.0742795772207 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.539764393029 0.324371583561 166% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0578865632191 0.0638462369009 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312181952875 0.228012699653 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463056922586 0.058150111329 80% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.41683366733 322% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 10.0 1.9629258517 509% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.