There should be laws to control the amount and type of violence shown on television programs.
To what extent do u agree/ disagree with this statement.
The telecast of violence shows has been increased in recent time. Some people believe that there should be restrictions to deal with the quantity and type of aggression producing programs on television. I personally totally agree with the statement, as it would be beneficial for our society.
There are only a few advantages of violent programs which are mostly for particular persons. For example, it attracts the audience, so more and more people watch it. As a result, the earning of T.V channels increase dramatically. Beside this, viewers also enjoy it and forget their problems for a brief moment. However, its negative effects on our society overweight the benefits.
Firstly, these types of programs make our society more prone to crimes. For instance, in 1980s when a serial killer was arrested in London, he confessed that he got his ideas from a T.V season. Similarly, many criminals have learned to escape from police from movies. In addition, it represents a negative image of our society so have a bad impact on grooming of our children. Furthermore, sometimes these shows disrupt the internal peace of many individuals causing them to be restless for a period of time. Such as, after watching a movie of a cruel king and his injustice with the general public will compel us to think about it for many days.
In conclusion, as negative effects of violence T.V shows outweigh the advantages. Therefore to save our environment from these drawbacks, there must be some type of laws to monitor the amount and variety of these programs.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'similarly', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258620689655 0.247107183377 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.124137931034 0.155533422707 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0689655172414 0.0946595960268 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.048275862069 0.0501214627716 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0724137931034 0.0437548338989 165% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.151724137931 0.122226691241 124% => OK
Participles: 0.0241379310345 0.0403226058552 60% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71959420918 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0241379310345 0.0326793684256 74% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0931034482759 0.0861772015684 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0137931034483 0.021408717616 64% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00689655172414 0.011925033212 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1576.0 1933.35771543 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 316.048096192 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.08494208494 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.362934362934 0.374742101984 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.301158301158 0.28420135186 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.216216216216 0.203846283523 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119691119691 0.137316102897 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71959420918 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606177606178 0.56093040696 108% => OK
Word variations: 64.4233204357 60.7387585426 106% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.1875 20.7743622355 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7252141561 49.517814964 56% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 127.492653851 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7743622355 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 0.814263465372 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 3.99599198397 325% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 46.3033301158 49.1944974215 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.77464788732 1.69124875643 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352088207317 0.332605444948 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0534481705878 0.102741220458 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.039947716898 0.0668466124924 60% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.460202032172 0.534860350844 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124188701104 0.148594505496 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119883535443 0.134430193775 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979956218937 0.0742795772207 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.288691746158 0.324371583561 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.052160743323 0.0638462369009 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256094459307 0.228012699653 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102690058711 0.058150111329 177% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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