These days, more and more people study or live abroad. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.
In today’s world, there has been an accelerating trend of studying and living in a foreign country. From my viewpoint, this trend will create certain benefits in some aspects, but there will also be some drawbacks.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why the tendency to move abroad is beneficial. First and foremost, people tend to have more study as well as job opportunities when they reach other nations, especially developed countries. It can be explained by the fact that there are several top-notch universities and worldwide enterprises with higher salaries out of their countries so they, therefore, may get there to improve their standard of learning and living. Another compelling reason is that the young generations nowadays like to challenge themselves in a hard way to assert themselves. For instance, a pupil who finished the learning program in his nation may want to move abroad to find more knowledge and understanding to boost his abilities in all aspects of his work. Not only does this motion help him enhance his experience but it also assists him to have more chances for getting promotion ladder as well as higher education in the future.
On the other hand, there are also numerous disadvantages of this trend that people should take into consideration. The primary rationale is that there is a potential risk of losing cultural identity in each individual who works and lives in other countries. This is because when they live in other places for a long time, if they are not aware of their culture, they may be assimilated with local people. Furthermore, these individuals are likely to face prejudice from the natives. Take America as an illustration, some Americans may look down on Asia people when they come there to settle, and up to now, there have been no radical solutions for this problem. Consequently, some of them decide to come back home due to their limited suffering after that.
In conclusion, the current trend of moving to live and work permanently is progressively increasing. As we discussed in the essay, it could bring some limitations, but its merits should not be overlooked.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'understanding boosting'.
Suggestion: understanding boosting
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01400560224 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82588215081 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582633053221 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8380471344 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.875 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205342942236 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572777794133 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042430742231 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100528457839 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319267055253 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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