These days, people work in more than one job, and often change career several times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
In modern life, more and more people have become hard-working than in the past that they often handle multiple jobs and tend to make a career transition in order to improve their standard of life and achieve a success. However, the consequences of this decision could be both positive and negative.
One of the main advantages of having more than one job is that people can open up plenty of opportunities. This can help to increase their salary and learn an entirely new set of skills simultaneously. Yet, having multiple jobs might not be right choice for staffs by following reasons: they should have excellent time management to maintain job performance at the same flow, their responsibility would be doubled which usually adversely impacts to their work-life balance. Therefore, people are used choosing alternative solutions to overcome their financial challenges.
Switching jobs is an another option for people to move forward. It is a good chance to not only obtain diverse knowledge, but also get a steep hike in income. In fact, most companies give more increment on salary for worker who has been hired recently . Nonetheless, in the initial years, new worker often has to work harder than the others to show his ability to that job as much as possible. In addition, employee who has contributed to the company for many years gets higher priority in job promotion than new comer, and sometimes the latter might regret and return back to his previous job.
To sum up, despite the fact that changing jobs and working in more than one job may enable people to earn higher salaries and gain diverse experience, it has its downsides worth considering. People working in two or more jobs have unbalanced time schedule and several obligations that occasionally it could be regretful decision for them. In addition, after switching their jobs, they frequently have to prove themselves multiple times and also wait longer for a promotion than permanent workers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'an option' or 'another option'.
Suggestion: an option; another option
...inancial challenges. Switching jobs is an another option for people to move forward. It is a goo...
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Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y for worker who has been hired recently . Nonetheless, in the initial years, new ...
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Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: NEW_COMER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newcomer'?
Suggestion: newcomer
...s higher priority in job promotion than new comer, and sometimes the latter might regret ...
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Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...d sometimes the latter might regret and return back to his previous job. To sum up, desp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, therefore, as to, in addition, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04294478528 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72433643235 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598159509202 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9663082633 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.428571429 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367500830522 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1187343851 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844204967642 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233326002495 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621698795208 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.