The threat of nuclear Weapons maintain world peace but nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. the benefits of nuclear technology for outweigh the disadvantages.
to what extent do you agree or disagree
It is said by many that provisions of nuclear energy not only act as a source of inexpensive and pollution free energy but also assist the globe to stay in peace. Even though they think that its merits dominate over its drawbacks, I would argue that it casts detrimental impact on environment and on world peace.
It is fairly easy to comprehend that why these are arsenals would lead to unbalancing the global peace because after the introduction of nuclear power every nation wants to make access to this power. By making approach to nuclear materials through the idea of generation of electricity, various nations will experimenting on nuclear radiation and make nuclear arms. During any war if any country become aggressive and release atomic missile for taking revenge, it would diminish the large area of land within seconds. For instance, during World war II the USA attacked two areas of Japan Nagasaki and Hiroshima where these nuclear fission not only deteriorated that places but also the negative effect of these radiations are even seen today. Hence, after the manufacture of atomic weapons we cannot expect word peace.
Additionally, even though nuclear power is a clean source of energy, it's residue is hard to store which cannot be contaminated and cannot be released into rivers due to its hazardous effect. If these are stored in a tanks, there would always chances of leakage of it, be it through humans or natural phenomenas. To examplfy it, as Japan is well developed and technology modernized country, in 2010, tsunami destroyed its nuclear power plant that put harm to the nearby mankind and increases the mortality rate. Thus, for using the atomic materials there would often chances of occasional accidents.
In conclusion, despite atomic power has its some pros, i assert that it would impart negative impact on the mankind as well as on environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: experiment
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Suggestion: a tank; tanks
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Suggestion: chance
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Suggestion: it's; it is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, second, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04487179487 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62750928875 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.2614788878 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.166666667 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209191033785 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730860113624 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582780152039 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109282206234 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623485205735 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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