The threat of nuclear weapons maintain world peaces. Nuclear power provide cheap and clean energy
The benefits of nuclear outwheigh the disadvantage
An unknown author had said :”Everything has two sides, a good side and a bad side.” Nuclear was not the different, too, although Japan still being hurten by two nuclear bomb and USA still get a lot of advantage thanks to the nuclear power, the rules not changed.
Nuclear power is the use of nuclear reactions to produce electricity. Nuclear power can be obtained from nuclear fission, nuclear decay and nuclear fusion reactions. It takes a lot of advantage to countries which own it, because of it’s natural unaffection, and it’s high power. With nuclear power, people can do a lot of work. Electricy, breeding, space energy, ... lots of thing you can do with this kind of energy, even ... destroying.
Beside of that, due to it’s powerful power, it’s very dangerous to use it carelessly, or inhumane. The accident, like Chernobyl, or Fukushima, cause a lot of damage to the world. Beside of that, in World War 2, a lot of nuclear weapon, such as poison spreer, spicy bomb, chemical weapon, even nuclear bomb and “rainbow grass remover”,which be known as “orange poison”, was created. They are very strong, and participant countries use them to take advantage at the war, and the indirect participant produce a lot of them to get high economy. And it’s damage is very high.The terriblest is two nuclear bomb, which was thrown by USA to Hirosima and Nagasaki, which killed a lot of people due to it’s explosion and affection. But the longest affection is the “orange poison”, which made a lot of people handicapped and live with that until death, and it’s affection still avalible until now, a lot of years later.
Everything, good or bad, should be used on right way. Nuclear is true, too. So it’s better to use it efficiently and carefully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Unpaired symbol: '“' seems to be missing
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Message: There should be a space after a closing quote.
Suggestion: ” Everything
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...clear reactions to produce electricity. Nuclear power can be obtained from nuclear fiss...
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Message: Did you mean 'of its natural'?
Suggestion: of its natural
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Suggestion:
...s high power. With nuclear power, people can do a lot of work. Electricy, breedin...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of things'.
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Message: Did you mean 'to its powerful'?
Suggestion: to its powerful
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Message: Did you mean 'its powerful power'?
Suggestion: its powerful power
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Suggestion: bombs
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Message: Did you mean 'to its explosion'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92026578073 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73409984925 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528239202658 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7687866725 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5625 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279790485365 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109492570671 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125305100644 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18195199633 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850148268698 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.