Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of society in which they are sold.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
There are certain consideration of factor which everyone take into account invesitagate and examine how famous consumer products’s sales are affected by the force of advertising. I certainly believe that the advertisments play a quite big role for selling. Someone can evidently weigh the pros and the cons of my each resons. The reasons on which my stance is based are discussed in details below.
The first reason coming to mind to substantiate my stant point is concerned with this issue that television’s advertising. It play such a significant role for selling items. With the help of reaching millions peoples, the seller get unbelievable income for their companies. The best example fit this notion is showing advertisement during the match hours of World Cup Chappionship. Several years ago, I was watching the match between France and Turkey which has been conducted by Germany at my home in the summer. By the time of first half break, i saw that the advertisement of Coco Cola in the television. Although I do not like coke, with the effect of promotion, I directly went to the market for buying a Colo Cola. It goes without saying that making a promotion on television in busy time which means lots of people watching it with happinies, there might such a strong influence on people.
Another vital reason which deserve some word here is the advertisement on website such as facebook, instagram, google, twitter so on and so fort. It is important to consider having thousands of followers. A vivid example can be given to shed light on the subject is one of my friend I have known him for a long time. In order to sell his products on the internet, he bought someone account in twitter which has more than 50.000 followers. Although his products did not have a any quality, the sales had got better suddenly. Without a shadow of doubt most of the seller do not care about customer needed.
Having considered all the aforementioned grounds discuss above, I am of the opinion that it is crystal clear two main factors which are advertising on television and well-known website I explained have substantial impact on customer’s choices even real needs of the society would be different.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94117647059 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91801282071 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604278074866 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7643935682 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2631578947 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6842105263 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94736842105 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111903967265 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0290442117298 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265105257671 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716363698679 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202085165341 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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