Today, high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Write at least 250 and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Advertising influence on consumer goods has been escalating rapidly, thereby people who often buy things which they are not necessary. While, in this essay agree with the statement because, surging sales data depicts that, customers keen interested towards the most active ads products rather than the people real needs.
Initially, involvement of promotional adverts in commodities makes up the sales to large extent. In other words, people have tend to buy things which has more commercial advertisements by their favorite celebrities. Many people believe that, the products had more ads and popularity would be beneficial and quality checked to the core. Since, such inclination seems to be purchase unwanted products and intent to avoid the actual needs or items. For instance, many parents often buy packed instant products like noodles to the children instead of other quality products like wheat or rice products.
Secondly, advertisement agency had a stringent role in people mind in order to purchase or marketing an items. Such as, many subliminal ads has a proclivity to attract the customers irrespective of their actual quality and quantity. Make use of ads in the news papers, medias, wall papers, often deliberately attack society to mitigate proper thinking and flamboyance to associated items. Limited constitution to promotional ads products may lead to excessive sales in marketing products without consider the consequences. For example, advertisement of energy drinks and cosmetic products are the hiking consumer goods, many peoples are unlikely to adore such products.
In conclusion, customers are often addicted to many kinds of adverts, which may lead to buy other products in order to less usage or lack of quality. Advertisements would be inevitable in sales, at once, inclination of peoples mind in popular ads may escalating many products sale, and in fact many of them are fruitless.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...rge extent. In other words, people have tend to buy things which has more commercial...
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Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an item' or simply 'items'?
Suggestion: an item; items
... mind in order to purchase or marketing an items. Such as, many subliminal ads has a pro...
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Line 7, column 268, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'products'' or 'product's'?
Suggestion: products'; product's
...mind in popular ads may escalating many products sale, and in fact many of them are frui...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4347826087 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.868017295 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558528428094 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.4444392909 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 116.071428571 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100907084958 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394576662304 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320985639112 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724781058134 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285521110069 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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