Today, it is common to see famous sportspeople advertising sports products. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, products related to sports are being advertised by famous players. Even though there will be a decrease in opportunities for advertising models, this essay will demonstrate how the number of sales has been raised by sports stars. Although the problem is a significant one, the essay do argues that the advantages of advertising by sports stars outweigh the disadvantages.
At present, Inspiration for most of the young generation is sports players. Therefore, if a famous sports player does an advertisement, product reach will be very high. My friend is a big fan of the famous cricketer Kohli. For the last 10 years, she has been wearing Nike shoes. Last year Kohli became a brand ambassador for Adidas sportswear in India. After watching his advertisement, she brought shoes from Adidas and started wearing them. Adidas company released year-end statistics of purchase sales of shoes in early 2020, it stated that the number of sales has increased from 5 to 25 percent within India.
However, this may lead to some worrying issues such as a decrease in opportunities for models working in advertisement companies. Which results in an increase in unemployment. One of my cousins named Keerthi is an advertising model in an ad agency. In the past, she used to be the brand ambassador for fila sportswear. But due to an increase in the trend for sports stars doing advertisements, she lost her contract with the company. At present, she is doing small roles in ads and remaining time working as a part-timer in a cafe to earn money.
Inconclusion, although there will be a decrease in chances for the sports models, it greatly increases the sales of sports products. Hence positive outcomes outweigh the negative outcome.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... sports players. Therefore, if a famous sports player does an advertisement, product r...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...els working in advertisement companies. Which results in an increase in unemployment....
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Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...increases the sales of sports products. Hence positive outcomes outweigh the negative...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10104529617 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94953446294 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567944250871 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4632741973 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3333333333 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9444444444 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206325980007 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660655288338 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714340652309 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136687355098 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832530049114 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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