Today, the life expectancy of people is much higher than before. Some people think that older people should continue to be involved in the workforces. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this modern era, maintaining health has become more popular, which is a reason for the increment in the life expectancy of people. Also, some people agreed that more jobs should be given to older people in companies due to their good health. This essay will discuss why people think that way and why I disagree with them, all the explanation is given in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, nowadays, many possible ways are available for people, which improves the physical bodies of humans such as yoga, gyms, diets, and many more. If people tend to start to follow all methods for becoming more fit, they will work hard than unfit people do. For example, one research has shown that doing regular exercises will improve physical and mental health. Therefore, some people believe that old-aged people should continue to be hired by companies. Overall, it is good to maintain health for humans, which will increase a life span in long run.
On the other hand, it is not a good idea that if a person physically strong would be perfect for a job. Although it will be beneficial for companies due to their experiences but not for younger people. Because younger people have abilities to work with new technology with minimal effort and less hard work. For instance, as per a result of the survey in the USA, over 70% of companies agreed that the younger one done the task in a small amount of time rather than the older people. Indeed, these types of evidence prove that having good health, which is good for humans’ perspective but, would be not a possible reason to hire older people in organizations.
In my words, I strongly disagree with the given statement. Providing more jobs to younger people will no doubt brings many positive outcomes in workplaces.
In conclusion, following various methods, which will help in health because it may create an impact on our life expectancy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85889570552 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46086459753 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549079754601 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1786685893 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254908226479 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941444195604 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982673512001 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14241329094 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859227352725 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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