This is a fact that most of the companies currently advertise through internet sources instead of other means due to plenty of reasons. However, as per the opinion of other people, it creates some problems for them.
Firstly, Internet plays an important role in every field of life nowadays and we can not even imagine life without internet services as people depends upon internet for various reasons. So, because internet can be accessed easily by everybody in these days, companies prefer to advertise their products and services via electronic methods. Secondly, advertising is required to let the customers know about new products and innovations by the company; however , they will not be able to buy the product without taking information about that. That’s why , large and small every organization which gives add, use internet for advertising. Finally, everyone keep using social media sites even youngsters love to spend most of their time to be active on Facebook, Instagram and YouTube etcetera. Therefore, companies could easily reach their end users of products by advertising through these sites or on the official website of the company.
Whereas, this creates some problems as some people promote fake adds and rumours on social media which impacts community in negative way . In addition to this , any add which is given on social sites, becomes viral in no time that sometimes involves half truth or totally fake information. Apart from this, when people get to much adds on sites they feel irritation, especially, when they are watching their favourite show.
To conclude, although internet is a good method of advertising by the companies but its overuse brings a few problems that can be harmful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20863309353 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62800171967 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618705035971 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3965452806 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225838142959 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838310823468 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568395914392 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142302765543 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618826013473 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.