Education is mandatory in order to survive in such a fast paced world.some people think that decent job could be gotten after graduating from a academic institution;however, others favour that getting experience by directly employing at any place provides large job opportunities in the future period of time . I opine that taking a degree from an university has more job offers as compared to direct employment in any company.
On the one hand, some people think that holding a university degree is not very important to get a good job position. First of all, people learn more and better when they work practically rather than studying during their graduation period, which provides them real life experience that is all they have to do on their job. Moreover, they they could be expert in their profession which they want to pursue as a career. Secondly, time is a significant and precious element in everyone’s life that is why people prefer to spend time on the thing where they could get high benefits and returns. Finally, instead of giving more time to study and after field related training people directly get on their employment for not only saving time but also get huge experience.
However, I support the idea that people must have a university degree for getting high reputed and high salarised job positions because while studying everyone go through from different subject’s which let the people know that which is their interesting field and highlight their capabilities. In addition to this, education makes people qualify for a particular job position as education is primary thing that indicates the academic qualification of the people that plays an important role in every job offering . The most important thing is that, everyone study almost similar subjects during secondary school education whereas, university study is depending upon the interest of the people this is a starting of anyone’s career . Therefore, education is a good measure of the qualification of people that helps in providing good job positions . For an instance, people choose different subjects before continuing university study such as medical subjects , bussinees study , computer courses and so on. Last but not least. Education provides basic knowledge to people about varying fields which makes people all rounded .
To conclude, although getting experience directly on working area is good for taking better job positions , my opinion is education is a big requirement before the job that provides knowledge as well as chances for some training programmes and replacement programmes by the universities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, in addition, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2200.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2757793765 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86712037396 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501199040767 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 697.5 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.0382625678 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.666666667 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0666666667 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26827806133 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985900643867 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705356082588 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175851312285 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228832591632 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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