Today many young people change their jobs or careers every few years. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
Nowadays it becomes increasingly popular among young adults to change jobs frequently, almost once in every few years. The public is arguing obvious advantages of this behaviours as well as potential harms. This essay will discuss underlying reasons for it and also why changing careers frequently eventually benefits young people.
In terms of causes of job changing, one reason that should not be overlooked is that youngsters are easy to feel bored. Growing up with products that are continuingly updated everyday, young people have adjusted to a lifestyle that requires fresh feelings frequently. They need to be motivated by new cultures, new friends as well as new jobs, otherwise they will experience boredness. Therefore, job changing is a alternative mean applied by youngs to stay fresh and away from boredness.
Another reason might be the desire of discovering new possibilities for young people themselves. For example, one might find themselves capable of being a psychoogist after changing the job from working for a IT company. A deep desire of exploring themselves could drive youngs try new careers quite often.
In my perspective, job changing has far more advantages compared to its negative impacts. Certainly, it is undeniable that youngsters might lose a sense of loyalty due to frequent job changing. Moreover, they might become easier to run away from one work to another when confronting problems, compared with counterparts who stick to one company for a long time. However, there are also three outstanding positive influence for youngs when they do change jobs at a often base. Firstly, they can obtain more and various work experiences, sometimes in several fields, which will provide them with a range of skills and equip them with knowledge. Secondly, their adaptability will be boosted through job changing as they are easier and quicker to fit into new environment, which is vital in such a fast changing society. The last but not the least, youngs will potentially find their real passion when they give themselves chances and opportunities to try different new jobs. They might be finally committed to a certain career after many failed attempts.
In conclusion, more and more young people change their careers once in few years. This essay demonstrated two possible reasons for it and also discussed advantages as well as disadvantages. From my point of view, not committing to a job in a young age will ultimately bring positive outcomes for youngs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2098.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21890547264 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84382217643 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547263681592 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3147998608 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.9047619048 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7619047619 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255953092004 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844789680025 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566919338293 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16555689893 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616293974894 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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